I got "inspired" by my younger brother, Paul, one day and wrote this poem.It is supposed to be from his (^) point of view. (the illustrations are of him too:)
Doin' My Time
by: A. Rose
by: A. Rose
Schoolbooks open,
Pencil in hand,
Why I’m imprisoned,
I don’t understand.
Pencil in hand,
Why I’m imprisoned,
I don’t understand.
While the day grows old
If only they’d let me
Out on parole!
And fish in the crick!
But instead I’m stuck here
In my bailiwick.
Not this air that’s stale.
I can hardly breathe
Here in this jail!
Hangs heavy o’er me
--Two HOURS ‘till recess:
I’LL NEVER BE FREE!
My heart is faint,
My head is swimming;
It’s this restraint!
I’ve got to complete!
By the time I’m out
I’ll be antiqued!
I‘ll be
If sometime soon
They don’t set me free.
These are my chains.
Securely shackled.
It’s inhumane!
It’s fryin’ my brain!
I’m goin’ insane!
I’m gettin’ chilblain!
One class to the next
In case of fire,
THROW IN THIS TEXT!
Who made up the rule
That from 7 to 2
I’ve got to do school!
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RECESS!!!!

Nice talent on this poem...and the pictures really make it REAL!! lol--paul dont worry b4 u know it u'll be out of there!lol
ReplyDeleteHaha! You did a great job!(I can really relate to it:) I LOVE all the pictures along with the poem,too.
ReplyDeleteLove you - hater of bacon stealing :)
thnx Gabi--and that's just what I keep tellin him!! :)
ReplyDeletehahahahahahahahahaha! thnx, Jasmin. I love you too. <3 Happy Valentines Day!!
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